My name is Raul, I've got black eyes and my hair is very black too. I'm taller than my mother and my sister,I'm five foot four. I don't look like my parenst, I don't know, at Colombo Juan Pacheco teacher is very tall, some fat but he is sociabol. In classroom Alejandra's got longer hair and Angel's got shorter hair.
Anny's look like Paola Rey, is beatiful, Gerard is tallest in classroom, he's six foot four, I know twins, they are very pettry.
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ok raul i'm going to tell you one mistake. you wrote parenst but the correct way is parents. it's the only mistake that I found
ResponderEliminarHey old Raul you have a little mistake in the word interesting. look for.
ResponderEliminarok. raul you are four mistakes and like: parenst, the correct is parents, sociabol; the correct form is sociable, no is in classroom is in my classroom, in the paragraph about you the word pettry is not aproppiate is pretty, but it was good.
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